T1+Infomatiom+Report-sloths

=__//**Wednesday 3rd march**//__= =**i am learning to construct an information report from notes i have organized under appropriate headings behavior**= __**Monday 8th March**__
 * Learning Intention:** I am learning to rewrite my sentences so that they vary in length, structure and beginnings.

= **//__sloths__//** =

Sloths are very out of the ordinary. They can weight up to 8kg,depending on the type of spices it is and some subspecies is endangered and I'll tell you there anatomy, behavior,habitat,diet,species and treats.

The sloths are out of the ordinary, because they are very lazy animals. They can weight up to 8kg depending on what type of sloth they are,some sub spices are endangered. I'll tell you the anatomy, habitat, diet, species and the treats.

//__**Anatomy**__//
The three toed sloth likes sitting upright in a fork of a tree branch,and the two toed sloth likes to hang upside down for most of their time.they can sleep up to 20 hours a day. They can grow between 600-800mm long.The algae that grows on the sloths helps them fit in to their surroundings.They have small ears,short tails,long arms and bushy hair.They can swim in the raining season they are also clumsy. The three toed sloth likes sitting on the right side up in a fork of a tree brunch, the two toed sloth likes to do the opposite way, hanging upside down of most of their time and they can sleep up to 20 hours a day. They grow between 600-800 mm long. The algae that grows on the sloth help it to blend in to their surroundings. They have small ears, short tails, long arms and bushy hair. they can also swim in the raining season and they can be clumsy.

=__//**habitat**//__= They live in the tropical rain forest of Central and south America. they come down from trees once a week to go the toilet.The rarely come down from trees.as you can see they are a tree dweller.And their habitat is being cut down. The sloth live sin the tropical rain forest of central and south America. They rarely come down from trees. They come down from trees once a week to go to the toilet. As you can see they are a tree dweller and their habitat is being chopped down.

__//**Diet**//__
They get most of their water from plants. They do not drink.They suck ants and insects from their nest like vacuum and they eat mainly fruit.

The sloth gets most of it's water from plants so they don't drink. They also suck ants and insects with their nest like a vacuum and they eat mainly fruit.

=__//**Species**//__= The two main species of the sloths are the two toed and the three toed.There are 5 subspecies. Not much is known how many Sloths are left in the world. Their prehistoric relative was the giant ground sloth witch grow over the size of an elephant.

The two main species are the two toed and the three toed sloth, there are five subspecies of a sloth. Not much is known how many sloths are left in the world. There prehistoric relative was the giant ground sloth witch grow over the size of an elephant.

=__Treats__ = If they are caught by a treat they will bite, hiss, slash, with their long claws and shriek. Scientists believe that sloths are slow because so less visible to their treats such as Hawks and Feral cats.

I f the sloth is caught by a treat they will bite, hiss, slash with their long claws and shriek. Scientists believe that sloths are very slow so they are less visible to their treats such as Hawks and Feral cats.

sloths are out of the ordinary animals. I think that they are amazing animals even though i haven't seen it.

sloths are out of the ordinary animals. I think that they are amazing animals even though i haven't seen it.

Student Comment: I liked doing the infomation report but i need to remember to put in capital letters
 * CATEGORY || **4** || **3** || **2** || **1** ||
 * **Organization** || I nformation is very organized with well-constructed paragraphs and subheadings. || Information is organized with well-constructed paragraphs. || Information is organized, but paragraphs are not well-constructed. || The information appears to be disorganized. ||
 * **Quality of Information** || Information clearly relates to the main topic. It includes several supporting details and/or examples. || I nformation clearly relates to the main topic. It provides 1-2 supporting details and/or examples . || Information clearly relates to the main topic. No details and/or examples are given. || Information has little or nothing to do with the main topic. ||
 * **Paragraph Construction** || All paragraphs include introductory sentence, explanations or details, and concluding sentence. || Most paragraphs include introductory sentence, explanations or details, and concluding sentence. || Paragraphs included related information but were typically not constructed well. || Paragraphing structure was not clear and sentences were not typically related within the paragraphs. ||
 * **Diagrams & Illustrations** || Diagrams and illustrations are neat, accurate and add to the reader's understanding of the topic. || Diagrams and illustrations are accurate and add to the reader's understanding of the topic. || Diagrams and illustrations are neat and accurate and sometimes add to the reader's understanding of the topic. || Diagrams and illustrations are not accurate OR do not add to the reader's understanding of the topic. ||

Peer Comment:I like the way you have layed your work out and that you have worded it well.But you should use different starter sentences as you use they alot

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